Comment on Export Control

My sentence was:
- “For example, technology exports should be regulated by the export control for the government.”
I should have added the purpose, reason or practical example to the sentence.
My correction is:
- “For example, technology exports should be regulated by the government export control since it is important to prevent the transfer of the technologies that can be potentially diverted to weapons or military use.”

I think the revision effectively clarifies the purpose behind regulating technology exports. Adding the purpose strengthens the first statement and gives a clear rationale for government oversight.